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This is something I wrote to go before this other piece [link]
And I'm thinking on maybe writing other two, I don't know.
And I'm thinking on maybe writing other two, I don't know.
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I like the composition, there is a nice fluidity to it and an understated mature elegance that gives it depth and flourish, I also really like the chord progressions - they are nicely arranged indeed!
.... however, if I make one suggestion..
Consider using a solo violin sound for the 'lead' line as currently, it sound a little too much like a mellotron.
IF possible maybe add a longer attack and release to the bass-notes as they seem to feel 'chopped' also.
So yeah - no issue with the music itself... it's a very well measured and tempered piece, but due to it's nature, I feel the sound pallet used seems a little too staccato, which lessens the majesty of it somewhat.
.... however, if I make one suggestion..
Consider using a solo violin sound for the 'lead' line as currently, it sound a little too much like a mellotron.
IF possible maybe add a longer attack and release to the bass-notes as they seem to feel 'chopped' also.
So yeah - no issue with the music itself... it's a very well measured and tempered piece, but due to it's nature, I feel the sound pallet used seems a little too staccato, which lessens the majesty of it somewhat.